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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 20 November 2018

Understating songs Lyrics

In literacy we have been learning about untamed and the meaning We listened to two songs, they were Treasure By Bruno Mars and Man in the Mirror by Michael Jackson.
We discussed and brainstormed the song title meanings.
We then looked at the lyrics and what they meant.
Treasure By Bruno Mars is about A girl that he got  she was a special girl.
Man in the Mirror by Michael Jackson is about He has changed  his life.

Here is my work I hope you enjoy it.
Bruno Mars  Treasure


Lyrics
What is the simile?
Adjectives used
What does it tell you
How does it make you feel?
Treasure, that is what you are
Honey, you're my golden star
You know you can make my wish come true
If you let me treasure you
Gold star
One of a kind
Special

Special
Fine
Good
Weird
Pretty girl, pretty girl, pretty girl, you should be smiling
A girl like you should never look so blue
You're everything I see in my dreams
A girl like you
Pretty girl
Beautiful
Not smiling  
A girl like you should never look so blue
Weird
Good
Ok

Thursday, 2 August 2018

Winter Recipe

Winter Recipe


First we brainstormed winter related words. Then we talked about words use to measure when cooking. We then wrote ingredients for winter using our group brainstorms.













Wednesday, 25 July 2018

Ascent at the park

For literacy we had been writing about our school holidays. This is my work.





Thursday, 5 July 2018

Winter Poem

Winter poem

This week in writing we have been leaning to writing slam poems this week I am doing winter. This is my work.




Winter poem


Rain comes down hard and cold from the dark grey clouds.
It drenches my clothes,making me soggy and wet and freezing cold.
Freezing like Antarctic ice.
When it rains it is freezing.
While it  rains I stay inside.
As I go inside from the cold I sit in front of the fire.
After, when the snows goes away I am sad because I love snow.
Before when I go outside I need to put heaps of warm clothes on me.
Sometimes when it is cold I have a scrumptious hot chocolate.

I love snow, but I don't like the cold.






Monday, 18 June 2018

Salm poem about Hornby

Libby’s Slam poem about Hornby


Hornby is in New Zealand. True
Hornby has a library. Not true because there is one in richton high school too.
I live in Hornby. True
I go to school in Hornby. True
People steal bikes. Not True
Hornby is scary. Not True
Hornby only has a Park. not just in Hornby
I love Hornby. True
Hornby is the best rugby club.True
I play winter sports for school in Hornby.True
Bikes get stolen. No true
Dangerous. Not true
Strangers. Not true
Weirdos not true
Murder not true
Hornby has lots of fun places to have some fun true

The hub has Time zone,Mega Air,Bmx Track,Scoter track,EB games,Liberey,Fast food places True factThe best school in hornby is South Hornby School.
Hornby is cool true
Hornby has cool school true
I go to a Hornby school true
I was born in Hornby not true
I play winter sports for school in Hornby true
I do CBG time with school in Hornby true
I Play at playgrounds in hornby
My friends live in Hornby true
Mr M said that he yost to live in Hornby when he was my age.
I play softball in Hornby it is called Rickton League softball club true.
Hornby is an amazing place to be!


Predictions Picture

Today Mrs McGuinnitey and her hole reading groups had to do this.
This is all of my work.





















Prior Knowledge

Donut,lost,lightning,screaming,yelling,raining,night time,stars,running away,heart is racing-boom boom,crying breving hard,scard,flashlight.







Clues From The Picture

A path to a house,people,stelingsomethinck from someone,trees,moon,monster,alam,knowone is in the house.

My Prediction about the picture - use your prior knowledge and clues from the text.


The kids are stealing donuts and the alam in the house went off.
A haunted house.


Wednesday, 2 May 2018

The best part of me

The best part of me



This week in writing we have been learning to use adjectives. We read the story "The best part of me" by Wendy Ewald. Next we barnstormed ideas about our best body part.This is my writing.What is your best body part and why?

The best thing about me is My hands My hands are the best part of me because

if I didn't have them I couldn't grasp a  ball to throw it.when I am playing in the playground at school I pull myself up using my hands.my dog ruby, to do jobs for the teachers. But thank god I do have my hand.  

Friday, 1 December 2017

Don't let the pigeon stay up late!

Don´t let the pigeon stay up late!

I think he should not stay up late because he will have to get up really really early and  do heaps of fun things but he will not what to do it because he will be so tired he will not what to get out of bed and he said that he will stay in bed all day.



He will be grumpy in the morning.


He will might have a busy day tomorrow.



If he sleep’s early he might get a treat the next day.




By Libby




Friday, 24 November 2017

Alarm call


We had to white about a goblin and a kitten. The story had to have a twist.  

Alarm call

What is happening down stairs?

When I was sleeping in my bed i heard a noise? CRACK! i am so scared what is that  down stairs? I came down Stairs then i soor pompom on her Pillow a sleep and i Saw a Bright green then i Heard this noise… then i ran up Stairs so fast i could not Brave at all. I came back downstairs and I took a photo of it but i could see it but on the Camera you could not see it at all. And i was trying to show the cop it but it did not show up! OMG THERE IS A MONSTER IN MY HOUSE! I am not  going to stay home alone again For good.


By Libby

Monday, 30 October 2017

Finding pounamu

I have been reading a book about pounamu.

I know that pounamu is shiney as glass and when you find one it feels like water is in my hands.


Can you help me, what do you know about pounamu?

Friday, 11 August 2017

Bliss Balls


Steps:


Washed hands for no germs….


. Equipment- food processor,measuring.

. Ingredients-raisins,coconut oil,cocou.

. How tomake 1. Place raisins or sultanas in the food processor and turn on. 2. Add outs to the food processor.3. Add desiccated coconut to food processor.4. Add Coconut oil to food processor.5. Process until raisins are smooth but you can still see the coconut.6. Roll into small balls and serve.1. Process for an extra 2-4 minutes until all ingredients are smooth,more like a paste and you can't see coconut separately.2. Roll in grated,chocolate,more coconut, crushed nuts or cocoa.





By Libby




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Friday, 7 July 2017

Wind

Wind



Boy it is hot today can you feel the hot sun?

Wind is air moving.

Wind is air in motion.
A windstorm is just a storm with high winds or violent gusts but little or no rain.

I like wind when there is warm air but I do not like cold wind.



Wind is so cold and my face is so freezing and my hair is so messy and you can see the trees is like wobbling like a bubble and it’s look crazy and the leaves keep falling.It’s look so good today is so sunny and sometimes is gonna be cloudy and rainy.It’ so cold and windy here!!



By Libby