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Wednesday 4 December 2019

Miss Birtch Story

A hill with trees and grass on top of the hill and some houses on the bottom. Some small and big boats on top of the nice blue clean water. Some rocks look like sand from far away and in the water you can see some light water at the front and at the back it's dark. There is this girl called Kalea and she has a dog that she took on her dad's boat and the dog jumped off the boat and swam back to the island because the dog was to scared of the water.

Kalea has long blonde hair. She lives on a boat with her dad and her dog. Kalea always wanted to go for a swim but she had no one to go with but then her dad said that she could take her dog with her so she tock her do with her and had a nice swim with her dog.

But then kalea's dog started to splash her even though she didn't want to get wet and she go to angry and took the dog back home and come back but she doesn't want to go alone so she tied to take her dad but he didn't want to so kalea go all upset and started to cry because she's never been down there before and she wanted to explore everywhere down there so then she didn't end up going.

After that her friend called Nici moved down the street for her so she asked Nici if she wanted to go down to the water with her. Then Nici said sure but do you have some togs that I could wear because all my stuff is in boxes. "Sure" so then they walked back down to Kalea's house so Nici could put some togs on. After that they went down to the beach but it was to dark so they had to go back home. But then Kalea asked her dad if Nici could go over tonight and he said sure so then they had an amazing sleepover together.



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