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Friday 24 November 2017

Alarm call


We had to white about a goblin and a kitten. The story had to have a twist.  

Alarm call

What is happening down stairs?

When I was sleeping in my bed i heard a noise? CRACK! i am so scared what is that  down stairs? I came down Stairs then i soor pompom on her Pillow a sleep and i Saw a Bright green then i Heard this noise… then i ran up Stairs so fast i could not Brave at all. I came back downstairs and I took a photo of it but i could see it but on the Camera you could not see it at all. And i was trying to show the cop it but it did not show up! OMG THERE IS A MONSTER IN MY HOUSE! I am not  going to stay home alone again For good.


By Libby
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  1. Anonymous9:24 am, November 30, 2017

    Hi Libby, I'm Sophie from Awahono School. Really like how you have put words like CRACK! Maybe next time you could describe the characters more. Over all I think you did a fantastic job. Here is the link to my blog if you want to check it out: http://awahonosophieb.blogspot.co.nz/
    From Sophie

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