Wednesday 1 August 2018
Wether
This is what I know about Weather. Comment and share your Knowledge about weather so I gain more information for my learning.
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Hello Libby! My name is Andrea from Parkview school,
ReplyDeleteI love your blog post on weather. I really like your use of some awesome describing words. I also really love the way you chose to display it! I just want to let you know that for the title of this blog post you spelt winter incorrectly. Maybe that can be something you try to fix in the future. You have a few other little spelling mistakes that you should go through and check for as well. Other then that your work was really good. What is your favourite weather that you have described in this piece of work? Mine is definitely the sun.