In writing we have been learning about using wow words. We watched a slow motion video about a flame thrower, Then we brainstormed wow words and similes to describe the flame.
Hi Libby Nici Here, I really like your writing. Maybe next time when you take the screenshot you could have it so that you haven't click on the photo so we can read the rest on the first paragraph. Where did you find the Photo from?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
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Hi Libby Nici Here,
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing. Maybe next time when you take the screenshot you could have it so that you haven't click on the photo so we can read the rest on the first paragraph. Where did you find the Photo from?
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