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Thursday, 16 March 2017

That Was Summer!
I remember smelling the sweet BBQ's in the air.
I remember tasting the cold bubbly brown coke fizzing in my mouth.
I remember seeing flowers blowing.
That was summer
I remember feeling so sweating.
I remember hearing the bees and the grasshoppers.

That was summer

 By Libby
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous12:10 pm, May 31, 2017

    Hi Libby,
    I love your poem, It reminds me of summer and I miss it.
    Do you miss summer as well?

    Thanks,
    Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School.

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  2. Anonymous12:17 pm, June 19, 2017

    thank you for the nice comment

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  3. Anonymous12:39 pm, June 20, 2017

    Hi Libby, my name is Lauren from St. Bernadette's School. I really liked the part when you said "I remember tasting the cold bubbly brown coke fizzing in my mouth". Maybe next time could you put more colour or summer pictures into it because it looks a bit plain. Overall it was very interesting.

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