Wednesday, 25 July 2018
Monday, 23 July 2018
Charisteristrs of a good friend
Characteristics of a good friend
Today my reading group was looking at this book on line it is called Leon and Bob, you should watch it. We looked at what makes a good friend. This is my work, I hope you like it.
Today my reading group was looking at this book on line it is called Leon and Bob, you should watch it. We looked at what makes a good friend. This is my work, I hope you like it.
Thursday, 5 July 2018
Winter Poem
Winter poem
This week in writing we have been leaning to writing slam poems this week I am doing winter. This is my work.
Winter poem
Rain comes down hard and cold from the dark grey clouds.
It drenches my clothes,making me soggy and wet and freezing cold.
Freezing like Antarctic ice.
When it rains it is freezing.
While it rains I stay inside.
As I go inside from the cold I sit in front of the fire.
After, when the snows goes away I am sad because I love snow.
Before when I go outside I need to put heaps of warm clothes on me.
Sometimes when it is cold I have a scrumptious hot chocolate.
I love snow, but I don't like the cold.
Thursday, 21 June 2018
Prediction
Prediction
In reading I have been leaning how to predict. I use my prior knowledge and clues from the picture or the text to predict. I had to use my prior knowledge about being alone in the forest and clues from the picture to predict what would happen next.
Prediction
Prior Knowledge about being in a forest or woods alone.
Trees,leaves rustling on the tree,dark,scared,stars,moss on the trees.
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Clues From the Picture
The monster is 3 times bigger than the girl.
The monster looks like a stuffed teddy bear.
The monster is fluffy,has 3 eyes,2 horns,the monster does not look scary at all.the little girl is skipping,whistling or singing.
The monster is trying to hide behind the tree.
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My Prediction… What will happen next?
The girl will see the monster and ask the monster if it wants to play with her or come back where she came from.
She was not scared of the monster.
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Monday, 18 June 2018
Salm poem about Hornby
Libby’s Slam poem about Hornby
Hornby is in New Zealand. True
Hornby has a library. Not true because there is one in richton high school too.
I live in Hornby. True
I go to school in Hornby. True
People steal bikes. Not True
Hornby is scary. Not True
Hornby only has a Park. not just in Hornby
I love Hornby. True
Hornby is the best rugby club.True
I play winter sports for school in Hornby.True
Bikes get stolen. No true
Dangerous. Not true
Strangers. Not true
Weirdos not true
Murder not true
Hornby has lots of fun places to have some fun true
The hub has Time zone,Mega Air,Bmx Track,Scoter track,EB games,Liberey,Fast food places True factThe best school in hornby is South Hornby School.
Hornby is cool true
Hornby has cool school true
I go to a Hornby school true
I was born in Hornby not true
I play winter sports for school in Hornby true
I do CBG time with school in Hornby true
I Play at playgrounds in hornby
My friends live in Hornby true
Mr M said that he yost to live in Hornby when he was my age.
I play softball in Hornby it is called Rickton League softball club true.
I play softball in Hornby it is called Rickton League softball club true.
Hornby is an amazing place to be!
Predictions Picture
Today Mrs McGuinnitey and her hole reading groups had to do this.
This is all of my work.
This is all of my work.
Prior Knowledge
Donut,lost,lightning,screaming,yelling,raining,night time,stars,running away,heart is racing-boom boom,crying breving hard,scard,flashlight.
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Clues From The Picture
A path to a house,people,stelingsomethinck from someone,trees,moon,monster,alam,knowone is in the house.
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My Prediction about the picture - use your prior knowledge and clues from the text.
The kids are stealing donuts and the alam in the house went off.
A haunted house.
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Friday, 15 June 2018
Softball poem
This week in writing Mrs McGuinniety told us to make a poem about something love I did softball because I love it this is my writing
Softball
I love Softball.
Been playing since I was 3.
I am the Pitcher
Been playing since I was 3.
I am the Pitcher
Everyday with my dad and my sister Emily we all practicals.
On Saturday my game is at 9:00 my sisters game is at 12:30 then my dads game is at 1:00.
On Saturday my game is at 9:00 my sisters game is at 12:30 then my dads game is at 1:00.
My friends in softball some of them come to this school there names are Hannah, Lalya- Rose..
When it is time for me to go up and bat whenever I bat I’m here.
BANG!BOOM!
When it is time for me to go up and bat whenever I bat I’m here.
BANG!BOOM!
That bat hits that ball then I run to first base and I see people staring at me on the felt.
I feel like I am the boss of the game no one can stop me.
So times I smell mud or food what people that are on the sideline so yummy.
I feel like I am the boss of the game no one can stop me.
So times I smell mud or food what people that are on the sideline so yummy.
I am definatly playing softball next year.I can't wait to play.
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